Closing The Email Sales Letter

Closing The Email Sales Letter

You may think that closing a letter is simple. Closing a personal letter is simple. Closing a sales email, which is intended to have a personal feel to it, isn’t simple at all.

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Obviously, you will sign your name at the bottom. You may also provide contact information and a link to your website. That actually is simple. The hard part is the closing paragraph. Of course, you want to use that paragraph to call your reader to action, if you haven’t already done so. However, you also want to end the email where you began – on a personal note.

Our sample email above would continue with the writer telling the reader that he really didn’t want to spare the time, but that his friend Buddy was so adamant that he read the content on that website that he decided to take five minutes out of his busy day to do so.

Naturally, he will have started out skeptical, only to be completely turned into a true believer by the time he finishes reading the information. So, how does the letter end?

I’m really going to owe Buddy big time for this. I know that this information has changed my life, and I may be able to have time to do the things that I want to do before next week.

Since I know that you are like me, and that you also want to have more time for yourself, I wanted to share the link that Buddy gave me with you. I realize that you are just as busy as I was, but believe me – this is worth your time. Take five minutes and look at the information. You will find it at www.amazingwebsite.com.

I’m going to go read more now. I feel that this is so important to my future that anything else that I had planned for my day can wait. I’ll bet you are going to feel the same way. I hope that you take the time to free up more of your time in the future, like I did.

Sincerely,

Great Marketer http://www.greatmarketingsite.com

That’s all that is needed really. Some marketers may add a postscript, some marketers may not. There is a way to decide this. Did you get your point across? Did you include all of the elements of a good sales letter? If so, the postscript isn’t needed. If not, add one, and use it to add that element.

Note that there is one other element in the last part of this email. The writer is telling the reader how they will benefit from taking the action. This particular reader will benefit from clicking the link, by finding out how they can free up more of their time in the future.

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Now, of course this is a simple email. There isn’t anything grand or even special about it. Some may even think that it is boring. Boring, however, is becoming a better thing these days. People have been fed so much hype over recent years that they immediately delete any email that even hints at hype.

While the general layout and verbiage of the email may seem ‘boring’ there is a story that is interesting enough to keep the readers interest. In terms of boring or over-hyped, you could call this email somewhere in between, and this is what you should strive for in your own sales emails.

This marketer does not come off sounding like they are better or more successful than someone else. They are the same as the reader, in the reader’s eyes. Now, this doesn’t mean that you couldn’t take a more authoritative stance. It really comes down to what it is that you are trying to sell. In the marketing arena, where the marketer is trying to sell something to other up-and-coming marketers, the authoritative ‘I am successful, you want to be successful, I can show you how’ stance would probably work better.

In this case, however, the marketer isn’t trying to ‘teach’ the reader anything. He is trying to sell a product that saves time. Perhaps it is software that makes it possible to complete a job in half the time. Maybe it is software for organization. The point is that the writer needs to put himself in the ‘same boat’ with the reader. They share this time problem, and the writer has found a solution to this time problem that he is sharing with the reader.

This is the one thing that many would-be successful marketers don’t get. There is no one right way to sell something. It all comes down to what you are selling, and whom you are selling it to.

So, the next time you construct a sales email; really consider your product and what problems that product can solve. Then, consider your audience. Finally, determine whether you are in the boat with the reader, waiting to be rescued, or if you are driving the Coast Guard boat coming to rescue them. It will make all of the difference in the world!

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Writing a sales email is one thing. Sending the email is something altogether different. Despite laws that are designed to protect cybercitizens from spammers, spammers still abound. They risk fines, and even jail time, yet they persist in spamming cybercitizens.

Because of this, the CAN-SPAM Act of 2003 was passed, and went into effect on January 1, 2004. This is a law that affects anyone who sends commercial email. Failure to comply with this law can result in up to $11,000 for each incident. That can add up to a lot of money.

You probably have no intention of sending spam messages, and you therefore may not think that this law is important to you. It is important, however, because there is a section of this law that you must adhere to with each email that you send out.

The law basically states that:

1. You must not use false or misleading header information. This means that the ‘from’ and ‘to’ fields of the email must be accurate. You cannot use a false name, or make it appear that the email came from anyone other than yourself. This should not be a problem if you are using an autoresponder service.

2. You may not use deceptive subject lines. This portion of the law basically states that you can’t use the subject line to make the recipient think that the email is something other than what it is.

3. You must provide the recipient with a method for opting out. This means that you need to provide instructions for unsubscribing from your list. This can either be an email address used for unsubscribing, or a website link for unsubscribing. Most reputable autoresponders will automatically add this information at the bottom of the email, but you need to be sure of that.

Furthermore, the unsubscribe link must be functional for at least thirty days from the date that you sent the original email, and you have ten days to honor the unsubscribe request. Again, a good autoresponder will handle all of this for you.

4. You must supply a valid physical postal address in the email. This is typically added at the bottom of the email, and is usually done so automatically if using a good autoresponder. Note that you may not use a

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post office box for the address. It must be either your physical address, or the physical address of your company.

Number four on this list is the one that applies to everybody, even though you won’t be sending out spam messages. Even failing to add your address can cost you $11,000 per instance, if you are reported.

It is really easy to be CAN-SPAM compliant, and again, a good autoresponder will ensure that you are. If for some reason you must be CAN-SPAM compliant manually, make sure that you include information for opting out, and your

physical address at the bottom of each message. Here is an example:

You are receiving this email because you or someone using your email address has requested it. You can choose not to receive email from us by visiting http://unsubscribe.com.

This is a commercial email from XYZ Company, 123 Any Street, Any Town, State, Zip Code, Country.

There is a great deal more to this law, and you can find additional information through the FTC website at: http://www.ftc.gov/bcp/conline/pubs/buspubs/canspam.shtm.

The good news is that the FTC doesn’t state where this must be located in the email. Again, put it at the bottom. Be sure to put the unsubscribe statement just under your signature, but you can hit the ‘enter’ key several times to force the commercial email statement and address to appear well below the rest of the email. Some marketers worry that the commercial email statement detracts from the ‘personal feel’ of the email.

Make sure that you visit the FTC website to read the entire law. This law applies to marketers, but it also applies to anyone who sends out adult related email. It also defines the law regarding methods used to send email out to people. It is very important that you read this law.

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Remember that sending spam will not only make you look bad, ruin your reputation, and result in fines and potential jail time, but it also makes marketers around the world look bad.